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Review:StormThief17 says:
Hey, StormThief again!

Again, I really like the description! You have a way of making the surroundings and environment very real. I can picture the snow and the cold very easily. As before, you might just jot down some bits about the characters themselves, especially the OCs. But nice job!

I'm really starting to fall in love with your writing. It is so smooth and simple, but really quite beautiful at the same time. I never have to go back and read a sentence again because it makes no sense. You're characters are lovely, not too simple but not going crazy and thinking about absolutely everything. Nice work again!

Author's Response: Again, totally see what you mean about description - that was definitely my weakest point starting out (and probably still is now). Just a little extra of the people could definitely have helped set the scene better.

Thank you so much for the review! I'm really glad you like the story so far. :)

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