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Review:Moonyxluna says:
He turned his head back to the window as a gentle rain began its mournful pitter-patter against the panes of glass -- THAT. LINE. *flails* that line. So much love. All of the other descriptions were SO beautiful. The rain and the sun came at the perfect times and I'm just going to sit here and fangirl some more. (Yep, it's a verb now :p)

I loved every single second of every single line of Draco here. He's just this- this completely broken man and through all of that he didn't care that the girl in front of him was a muggle born, but he needed her there and pushed everything away to keep her around. I felt every emotion he had here, I smiled when he smiled and my heart wretched when he was sad.

I was so scared Amelia wasn't going to be able to be there after Mr. Lamport tried to get her to leave! I thought it stayed very true to Draco -- good or bad, well that doesn't really matter at this point -- that he threatened the money his family puts towards them. And the scar! I thought Amelia's reaction was perfect.

Hmm.. what else can I fangirl about? Ahh! His little thoughts to himself. He lurves her! Okay.. maybe not that much.. yet! I LOVE how he's so confused about his feelings here. and the kiss! Amelia's reaction was so funny how she couldn't really place what had just happened. I liked how you set it up too; it was so unexpected and just happened, I think even he was surprised a little by it :)

Okay.. I loved this. I can't wait to read what happens next, fantastic work♥!

Author's Response: Hahahahahaha I am so glad that you liked this! I was really worried about this chapter and if it would seem too rushed. I am at ease now. This review puts a smile on my face everytime I read it! =) I am glad that you liked that line!! It is my favorite one! I am glad you like the contrasts between the sun and rain.

I am so happy to hear that the emotions, details and reactions came across the way I wanted them to. I figured it was time for them to be more united. Mr. Lamport is a revolting man and he's not completely gone from the story line yet.

I am having a hard time putting in words the way I feel about this review! I am just so excited that you liked it! You might be onto something in your last paragraph there. Although I don't want to give too much away. ;)

Thanks again!! You've really helped build my confidence as a writer. Thank you for that!

-SR17


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