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Review:ashleydelacour says:
I can't begin to tell you how much I was freaking out during Marta's dream, because I thought it was really happening in your story. Thank goodness, because I nearly toppled over myself thinking, 'That's not at all how McGonagall acts! She would never be that mean!'. And then she woke up, and I felt immensely better.

Very glad that Marta was the one to apparate first. After that dream, I was feeling really bad that she was so behind in everything. Still a great read so far.

Author's Response: With that opening scene, I thought the lions prancing around the classroom were clues that Marta was dreaming. Don't worry, I don't think I butcher the canon characters' personalities too badly. :)

I figured that Marta should be able to shine when the desire to succeed is present. Basically, any means of getting distance between her and Benjamin will motivate her to be the best and not as pathetic as she believes she is. Hence, this chapter was born! Thank you for reviewing, and I hope you continue to enjoy!


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