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Review:Ugh says:
The first chapter is extremely whiny. It gives off a flighty almost stupid vibe that your writing needs to fix. Its lucky that i skipped to chapter 17 and thought the plot had a bit more entertainment. Make sure to set the scene well! At the moment its actually quite horrible...

Author's Response: I'm sorry you're not enjoying the story. I'm not sure exactly what you mean by whiny, perhaps you could clarify? I understand what you're saying about the plot being a bit slow at the beginning, but I felt that this chapter served as an introduction to the characters and the story in general. If you have any suggestions on how to improve, I would appreciate them. Thank you for reviewing.
Sabrina :)

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