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Review:Jchrissy says:
Here from review swap! Sorry I had a bit of an emergency that I needed to take care !

Your characterization of Fred was perfect! It was so cool to see everything from his POV and see his reactions to these situations. I think you gave him his own personality but still kept him our Canon Fred, it was absolutely great!

He was just absolutely great around.

I like Angelina and George's place in this also, it's so nice to get a look inside their characters and have that extra level involved in this chapter!

Katie was so sweet and perfect! She was believable, real, and an amazing counterpart to Fred!


It's so sad and happy at the same time for me to read stories about Fred where he is still living. It reminds me of how much I love this red headed person, and then I always feel that stab of pain remembering him die.

Ahh. Now you have me emotional.

Great one shot!!

Author's Response: Wow I'm so glad that you liked my version of Fred, personally writing Fred and George scares me because they are such jokers and I haven't dabbled much in writing funny stories so this will be a bit of a challenge but I'm glad that you like how its turned out so far! I didn't want the story to just be about Fred and Katie, while they are my main characters, George and Angelina will be around a lot as well, as Fred and George are almost inseperable. I do hope that you continue reading as I post more chapters which should hopefully be soonish! I have the start of the second chapter already, I've just gotten sidetracked by new WIPs. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!

~Slytherinchica08~


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