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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Back again and so sorry that I'm late but here I am with another review for you. I was so happy that this was long and we're back to Bill! I really liked how you had his time at Gringotts not being what he'd expected and not fulfilling his fantasies, it sounds like something that would happen to anyone. And did I enjoy him going after Fleur? Yes, I did! But things may not go so smoothly for them, I'm afraid! I want to see what's going to happen you have to update immediately or suffer my wrath! Pacing was excellent, not grammar issues and I love how you have these characters!
Much love (And sorry for the delay on my work!),
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hi!

Bill is definitely much easier than Fleur to write, and I think this is really reflected in the comparison of the chapter lengths! Yes, poor Bill, coming from being a curse breaker in Egypt to working in Diagon Alley had to have been a bit of a let down, and I really wanted to explore this, though conducting a wild goose chase round the building for Fleur certainly livened things up!

Will things go smoothly for them? Well, the course of true love never did run smooth and all that, so we'll just have to wait and see! The next chapter is in the queue and should be up soon!

Thanks again, and I'm really looking forward to your next updates as well!!


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