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Review:Slide says:
I write more than I read, so I must credit your swanky banner and evocative Shakespeare quote for catching my eye. Clearly I am an audience easily entertained by pretty things. But after reading I intend to follow this story with GREAT interest. Fantastic, intriguing idea. I think it's hard to justify and explain Harry choosing to not go back, but equally I think you did it as well as it is possible to explain such a choice (without going further back to plant the seeds), and my breath actually caught at "Mum, I'm coming home."

So, a beginning of infinite promise and I will definitely be keen to see more of this story! Good luck with it all!

Author's Response: The funniest thing about this -- I've been compiling a summer reading list, as far as fan fiction goes, and literally an hour before receiving this review I'd added your Latet Anguis in Herba to my list. Your stories look SO good, and I really can't wait to read them! But anyway, I thought it was awesome to see your name back here afterwards. :)

One of the hardest things I've yet had to think about as far as this story goes is manipulating canon away from the expected, while still maintaining a fairly stable outcome. JKR's own storyline is so tightly tied up, and I've such a passion for sticking to canon, that it was quite hard to do at first. I'm glad you've found this first chapter explainable, though -- really means a lot to me to hear that!

I definitely would love to see you back to check out further updates. :) So sorry for the wait in responding to this review, and thank you very much for reviewing at all! Looking forward to future comments from you!

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