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Review:angel_speaks says:
Wow! This is very well written!!! There were minimal grammatical errors and it flowed really well. the amount of dialogue was proportionate to the a,punt of description incorporated in the story and that played a big role in the flow of the story!

Prior to reading this piece, it was a bit difficult for me to imagine Luna and D. Thomas together. As I always envisioned her, just like Harry Potter, the lone ranger type. Ya know, that one character in the story who you really can't imagine being with someone. However, after reading this, I'm honestly falling in love with the idea of them being together! I love it! You did a very good job indeed!!!

I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work. Please feel free to request another!

Happy Writing! 10/10

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for coming by with this great review! :)

Haha, I'm glad I've converted you to the Dean/Luna bandwagon! I totally get what you mean...it's hard to imagine someone working well with Luna. I could see Dean being very accepting of her and embracing the things that make her different, which is why I think they'd work so well :)

Thanks for the comments on description and dialogue balance. That's something I was a little unsure of, so you've helped me not worry so much about that.

You know, I think I will come by your thread with another story soon. Thanks for the offer! And thanks again for your time and comments :)

--Maggie


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