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Review:Loopy456 says:
Hello! Well, this was a lovely long chapter. It must have taken you ages to write! I was going to read it yesterday but I was quite busy and I didn't really have the concentration to devote to a 9000 word chapter, so I came back today.
Another excellent chapter, I must say. Blaise is becoming more and more intriguing. I hope we will find out much more about him eventually. And his mysterious sibling. And I really hope that Astoria's father doesn't take it upon himself to kill Blaise. That would be a bit rubbish. I enjoyed your descriptions of the Zabini house, and also Blaise's dry sense of humour. I like him.
Like I said, good work. I'll be back soon, and I'm looking forward to reading more reviews from you!

Alex :D

Author's Response: Hello!

I had no idea that this chapter was so long but it did take a minute. I revised and edited alot and by the time I got to something I liked, it was massive! Its strange, but the others are relatively short compared to this one, but I had to put alot of information into this.
Ah, Blaise...what is there to say about that bloke other than he's simply amazing? And an oddity, which makes him very difficult to write for. You find out more about him in the chapter after this and you won't like his sister, who doesn't show up until the later half of this story. Right? God, I hope so...:p
Well, if you read the last chapter that I posted up, you may or may not rule Astoria's father killing him off as the only terror awaiting him. But he probably would though, to keep their secrets safe but he's a very calculating man and has alot of horrible tricks up his sleeves.
The Zabini Estate hadn't really been thought on, but I settled on something as different from the Malfoy's home as I could. Its like a fancy museum or something but I'm relieved that you liked it! I can never describe homes correctly...sigh.
I think I should start calling this story "A Force of Blaise" because the ladies are loving him and this story gets read more often than I would have ever thought. D: Shocking!
Will be back soon myself to read your own stories and it'd be great hearing from you again!
Much love,

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