Hey you! I finally gotten around to reviewing this like...16 days after you requested it. And I am sorry for that, my internet has been down for at least two weeks or so now and I still haven't gotten it back.
Anyway, four chapters and the story has already ended but I'm happy there's a sequel to look forward to! I found myself relating to this chapter SO SO much, in the previous chapters I kind of understood her dilemmas and problems and I did relate to it. But chapter four, oh man, I can just put myself in her position right now. I want all the girls in my school, especially the people whose faces are covered with foundation, to read this. This is bloody amazing.
The weird thing is, Molly goes through all this while she's 15 years old. I had to go through this when I was thirteen and hell, girls were getting pregnant at that age. Yes, they need to get some more sense into them.
I really love how you write things out so well, not to mention the teenage drama! Molly, like I said before, is so easily relate-able. I think its because most girls go through the same things in their life, especially in teenage years where your life is everyone's business. I can't help but feel for her when the mascara scene came on, I know how it feels. I still poke myself with it because I'm too lazy to get up every single day an hour early for school just to have enough time to put on make-up. I prefer being, as they say, 'natural-looking'.
And in case I did not get to the point, I doubt I did, MOLLY IS FREAKING AMAZING AND SO ARE YOU BECAUSE YOU WROTE SUCH A FANTABULOUS STORY!
I'm sad to see this one end, but there's going to be a sequel! I will be on the look-out for that, for sure. :D
This story just made my day,
Author's Response: Cloak Auror!
AH! Thank you so much for such a lovely shiny review (you make me hapyyy, when times are greey!) Don't worry about how long it took, you legit took my day with this review and THEN by recommending this on the forums (I squeed a lot inside) and basscially, I love you. Cool?
I've had a lot of people saying that the ages are a bit off and I've got to say I completely agree. I was going to start when Molly was 13 and have it has... 13,15,17,18 but it didn't feel like it made a lot sense. So I'd say that it makes a lot of sense. Plus, I'm pretty sure theres a lower age bracket for girls getting pregnant according to the TOS. Scary stuff though, right.
I really wanted this story t be relatable so I'm so glad you think it was! Ahha, mascara woes.
BUT THANK YOU FR SUCH A LOVELY REVIEW YOU'RE LOVELY :D