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Review:tangledconstellations says:
Oh Hagrid! :( Oh Sirius! :( oh Dorcas! :(

This was another really brilliant chapter, efficiently reminding the reader what has passed but also bringing new emotional elements in too. I wish Lily was doing what was right for Harry. But then, maybe she is. I just feel as though there would be a better way for all of this. I also really sympathise with Sirius, for being slightly repulsed by Lily's fondness for Sev. Of course much of it is understandable but then there's also the sense of loyalty the two best friends would feel for one another, intermingled with the sense of loss Sirius would feel too.

Again, this is another really brilliant chapter. I know great things will come of this fic!

Laura xxx

Author's Response: Thanks. You're totally right that perhaps Lily is not doing the right thing for Harry, and Sirius, being a good godfather, is standing up for Harry's interests. He just barely trusts Snape to be in the same room with Lily and Harry, and seeing the two old friends grow close again is painful. Thanks for your insightful review!

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