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Review:RosieWeasley says:
Oh poor Bill, I can't imagine it would be much fun working at a desk after being a curse breaker! I loved this chapter once again. You really got into the mindset of Bill's character and portrayed his emotions and his family life really well, what with Percy being a prat and all that! The concept of this chapter was great and the whole idea of Bill going on a wild goose chase all over the bank looking for Fleur was really touching and sweet. It's interesting how Bill feels he is not enough for someone like Fleur, and yet she feels the same about him. I can't wait for them to meet and fall in love! The ending of this chapter was brilliant; after all that, he actually manages to find Fleur and she's pointing her wand at his chest! You had me in stitches! Please, please update soon, I can't wait to see what adventures you bring them on next! Just a quick question, is this story going to continue up to Bill and Fleur's wedding, or go on further (or even shorter but I don't want it to end soon!) Rest assured, I will be reading it until the end!

Author's Response: It can't have been the easiest thing for Bill to do, moving from Egypt back to England and I've been intrigued by this since it was first brought up back in Order of the Phoenix, and I thought I'd explore that whole situation in this chapter! I really am enjoying writing this story, though it hasn't been getting a lot of reviews, but I'm definitely sticking with it! For some reason, I actually find it easier to write Bill than Fleur, though as someone who absolutely loves Percy Weasley, it practically killed me to describe him as a prat!

At the moment, I think this story's going to continue up until the birth of Bill and Fleur's first child, but as I say, I'm not entirely sure yet, we'll just have to wait and see! Thanks again for your lovely reviews, they're always very much appreciated!


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