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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
I love that poem. And I love this one-shot. The forsakenness that Snape feels is embodied perfectly by the poem, and you captured that with your words.
The descriptions and figurative language were gripping and almost heart-breaking. It was beautiful to read.
And though I don't necessarily agree with the Sirius and James pairing, the fact that Snape got a second chance with Lily in the afterlife was just so wonderful. I could never actually picture them being together until I read this. :)
So, marvelous, fabulous, GENIUS writing. 11/10. ;)

Author's Response: Heh, forsaken - fits my name. ;) It's such a fantastic poem and I think it really helped me get into the mindset for this fic.

I'm so glad you think it's beautiful. I really wanted to get back to my roots and use a bit more flowery prose with this, so it makes me really happy that it worked well for you.

Well, James/Sirius isn't for everyone, and I don't normally ship them, but wanted to for my afterlife fics, so it's okay if you weren't a fan. It was actually the Snape/Lily that allowed me to write the James/Sirius so this was always a consideration for an outtake.

Ah, I'm really pleased that you actually considered their pairing after reading this. That makes me so happy. :)

Thank you for your kind words. You are too sweet. Thank you.

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