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Review:Remus says:
Hey! Perelandra here from the forums. So sorry for the super late reply, but I'm here!

This was definitely an interesting read. I've never would've thought of pairing Minerva and Tom Riddle but seeing how Minerva is only 9yrs older than Tom I suppose it could happen. XD

Description here is amazing. I really, really enjoyed it for it puts me as the reader in Moody's shoes and sent to Hogwarts. When it comes to characterization, I think you got Dumbledore's secretive self and Moody's roughness just right.

I can't comment much on plot just yet as this is the prologue but this is definitely a story and ship to explore further into.

Thanks for requesting. Once you update, feel free to re-request if I'm open. :)


Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing this! No worries about lateness - those reviews offered topics are hard to keep up with (which is why I admire anyone who manages it!). It's wonderful that you've taken the time to offer! :D

Tom/Minerva has a following of sorts - it's a curious ship, like the snob's version of Dramione. :P One of those unlikely ships that's still fun to play around with. But in this story, according to the Pottermore canon on McGonagall, the age range is the other way around - Tom is 9 years older than she is. It's different from what I've usually written in Tom/Minerva stories (where she's a year older than him), so I'm not sure where that's going to take me.

I'm very glad to hear that this first chapter worked out in regard to descriptions and characterization - those things are more important to me than the plot (which I usually manage to muddle, no matter how hard I try), so it's a great relief to know that the story's on track. Thank you again! I'd be happy to re-request from you once the new chapter's up! :D

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