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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:
MOLLY LET ME LOVE YOU ♥

I sort of felt like you wrote out my life story in this, minus the magic of course, but then again, don't most teenage girls go through the same thing? Again, I feel like my school must have been horrifically superficial because this whole thing happened around age 11, but the point is that it happened and Molly’s reactions were just so spot on.

This one paragraph really stood out to me, and I won't quote the whole thing because it was long, but this in particular: "Instead, Molly's method of attacking her lack of confidence was to scoff at the pair of them whenever they started the regular routine of oh-my-gosh-I-hate-myself oh-no-you’re-the-most-beautiful-person-I've-ever-met and pretend, well not quite pretend, that she thought they were all being vain, shallow and childish." That was like…I’ve been there. And her whole attitude of being scared that no one would contradict her was just so real. I wanted to jump into the computer screen and give her a hug and remind her that it wouldn't matter in a couple years. Her first foray into the world of makeup also went admittedly better than mine, so she should be proud of herself :D

WHAT IS THIS MOLLY/DEXTER SEQUEL I HEAR OF? I shouldn't be encouraging you but…please? This was a lovely story and the most relatable thing I have ever read, along with being entertaining and quirky. It’s what you do best :)

-Naida

Author's Response: Pah, honestly I've always thought the ages were a tad off. I wanted to start at 18 and I was originally going to go like...18,17,15,13... but then the chronology was all uneven (and 18,16,14,12 just felt all wrong, really) so in the end I decided that I'd just write it yearly and deal. BUT YEAH THIS IS ALL ABOUT TEENAGE GIRLS WHICH IS WHY I WAS EXCITED TO WRITE ABOUT IT. Yes.

That was definitely me too. Being all like I DON'T EVEN CARE ABOUT WHAT I LOOK LIKE (butbut butbutbutbut, I am OKAY? Aren't I?). But it's true, it doesn't matter in a couple of years - and that's what I liked about going backwards, I think.

SEQUEL IS UPSIES. Well, one chapter of it is :)

Thanks for being lovely (as always)

-AC


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