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Review:peppersweet says:
ska is not the music to be listening to whilst I read this fic. switching to something suitably atmospheric.

so. that first paragraph sort of floored me.

It died for a good cause, for that spark and ripple, for the just-offbeat, shared rhythm of their hearts held apart only by construct, by what was safe for the human mind, human body, tiny things. Life is damn boring. - aaah. I want to say something more meaningful than 'I love this' but, as you know well, I am finding it difficult to precisely phrase just how much I love and appreciate this fic. how did I even get to do english lit at a-level? I just think of all those essays I sat and wrote about angela carter and kazuo ishiguro and I wish I could do the same for fanfiction, because fanfictions like this are worthy of the same sort of analysis and devoted attention, but I just...I think I have too many feels. I am so wrapped up in this fic. it's like a blanket I can wrap my mind in, a blanket all patterned with cosmic stars and stuff. I don't even know where I am going with this either. sorrysorrysorry. back to my corner.

oh astoria you are a very trippy drunk

because goodness is a seed, it starts in the heart and spreads its leaves through the body like electricity. / He's gone to do good. Make good. To get it outside of his body, a bit, she thinks, smiling at this, like germinating. We're all growing up. - eee eee eee what is this it is so beautiful.

okay, I love this. this is so...ah, it's so delicate and beautifully crafted. teach me your ways! ♥

Author's Response: oh dear. the drunk chapter! it's ugh better now than it was before. i have totally changed things again. the story is ending booo ): oh god you're relating me to phenomenal author's i can't i can't! but i appreciate your dedication to this. it's really unbelievable. cosmic stars = the best kind of stars.

i can teach you my ways! buy yourself enough poetry to serve as wallpaper to your whole house and then lock yourself away and get moody/angsty for long periods of time and occasionally surface from your cave for creature comforts, mainly tea and sometimes vegetable curry. add in a few years of school with really incredibly talented writers, a somewhat uncertain but also really good childhood, feelings, hormones, and carbs--shake, boom!

thanks so much for your reviews ILY ♥


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