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Review:married to black says:
Amazing. That's the first word that came to my mind when I asked myself what I thought of this story. It was amazing. Your narrating was wonderful. The pace was great, you didn't concentrate too long on a specific section. You made it flow wonderfully. I would have personally enjoyed a little more description; since this story has a serious, dark tone to it, I would have liked a bit more descriptions to cast that mood even more and better explain Minerva's thoughts and feelings on the losses she had and such. But truthfully, the plot was wonderfully thought out and written; the structure of the story and the smooth style it was written it was just lovely; and the way you approached it - Minerva aching over her the boys and how she wished she could have done more to prevent this - is just one that I rather adored and enjoyed it. You pictured the scenes and the emotions well. While I did want a bit more description to paint it even more, I was able to successfully imagine the story in my head. The characters! I could not find a single flaw with the characters. They were each their own and I love how true they stuck to the way Rowling had made them. Your depictions of the characters were flawlessly done. I loved them. Not to mention, the Marauders boys happen to be a personal favorite of mine so I really enjoyed the way you painted them to be. :)

Not only was your writing style really marvelous, I also could not find any grammar or spelling mistakes. Your vocabulary was outstanding and the grammar was just as fabulous. 10/10. I really loved this and am glad to have gotten the chance to read and review it! A great piece. :)

Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked it, thank you! I've heard comments from people about expanding it and adding more detail, and I can understand where you're coming from. Part of me wants to add more to please you guys but the other part of me thinks this was meant to be a fairly simple one-shot and I don't want to muddle the emotions with more description. I'll sit on it for a while and see how I feel about adding to it later on, but thank you for expressing your desire for more.

I'm glad the structure and style worked for you. Minerva was such a fascinating character to work with in this setting and I really enjoyed it. The Marauders are always a favorite, so I'm so happy you thought they were well-written. That's my goal. :)

Thank you so much for your sweet comments. I'm beyond flattered at how much you liked this. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

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