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Review:DawnRain says:
I'm back for another review now that I'm caught up on chapters. You do have an issue with confusing words ("dose" for "does," "insight" for "incite", etc). It's understandable since MS Word doesn't realize there's anything wrong, since they ARE words, just not the right word for the context. My suggestion would be to read carefully and make a list of the words you do that with most often. Then you can use the Find feature in your word processor to find the mistakes easily and fix them.
I really like this story, though. Other than the word mix ups, it's very readable. Your grammatical structure is strong overall, and your characterization is thorough. I look forward to more!

Author's Response: Your advice is really quite good. I am just concentrating on writing the chapters currently, and making rudimentary edits but when I have finished I will be sure to root out those errors. Thank you for you lovely edits. I hope you keep reading despite my poor spelling. Yours,

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