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Review:Live Life Large says:
Hey Jenny! Sorry it took so long to review your challenge entries; I really wanted to take the time to leave a nice, long review and I didn't really have the opportunity before now.

To start, I really liked how you wrote this in present-tense, I've tried writing like that before and I personally think it's harder than past, so nice job on that! You really managed it well, and it didn't feel choppy or awkward at all.

This. Was. Hilarious. I love reading funny one-shots, which is why I created this challenge; they don't take a lot of time to read, I don't have to read through pages of descriptions and introductions, and I get to laugh really hard without reading any angst, when generally accompanies any novel. This story was enjoyable because of the above reasons, but you also went up and out with your characterization (which was remarkably good for only 1528 words) and your witty banter.

My favorite quote was probably:

"'You are completely insane,' I pant.

'I think that’s relative,' says James. “Compared to, say, Bellatrix Lestrange, I’m completely normal.'"

I now have a new comeback. Thank you(;

The one thing I spotted was that you forgot to make the word "vagrant" plural when you wrote: “I will find vagrants and miscreant and rule-breakers, and I will make them beg for mercy!”. That's really all though(:

Thank you for entering my challenge!
Live Life Large(:

Author's Response: Thanks for such a lovely review :)

I'm glad you liked my characterisation, and I try so hard to make things funny, so I'm happy that worked out! Thanks for the challenge, and I'll edit that typo soon! Also, that's one of my favourite lines too :)

Thanks for the review!

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