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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Uh-oh... Broom closet time?! It was like a cliche that wasn't a cliche anymore, because it was about the mission instead of a random snogging session.
Fleur's character is showcased so well in this chapter, I think, especially since Bill is starting to like her a little bit. She's definitely a manipulator, but he isn't drooling over her. He's in control of himself, and he complements her perfectly!
There were a few confusing sentences this time around, but I managed to work them out for myself. Other than that, I think a few words could be taken out or rearranged here and there. That's really all I saw that I was iffy about.
I hope the next chapter comes out soon, because I want to know about the date!! :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I had so much fun with that - I just couldn't think of anywhere else to have them enclosed in a small, dark space, and hoped for the best :P I'm really glad you liked Fleur here, too! I'm trying to do them both justice without sugar-coating things. Bill and Fleur's strength is certainly fun :D

Aargh I do have trouble formulating what I want to say sometimes; thanks for pointing them out, hopefully an edit will sort them! I'm trying to update as much as possible, and thank you for such a lovely review :)


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