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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
Hello there!!

Here with some more reviews for you! Honestly, if you wouldn't have suggested this fic to me, I probably wouldn't have chosen it. That being said, I'm so glad that you did!! This was very enjoyable and fairly unique opening chapter.

I thought the way you slowly revealed the muggle woman's story to us as your OC learned it was a very effective decision stylistically. I didn't spot any technical errors as I was reading, and thought that over all this was a strong opening chapter. I'm anxious to see what is going on exactly and where this story is going!!

On to chapter two
xoxo
Melissa

Author's Response: Again, I am really, really sorry it's taken me so long to respond to this. The House Cup ate my soul.

I'm glad you found this intro intriguing - that's definitely what I was going for, but I was a bit worried I wouldn't succeed. Thank you for the review! :)


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