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Review:PotterUnited says:
YAY! She's finalizing realising that she likes James... Hallejulah! And I LOVED that you included the Room of Requirements :D dancing trolls are hilarious, however sometimes I think introducing random things like the massive James in R.O.R can seem a bit random and bazaar in stories- it suddenly seems sort of less realistic- this story has been so realistic to what I picture the Marauder's at Hogwarts to be like- I can really imagine the characters acting like this! However, I'd love to see something like that in one of Lily's dreams- PERFECT in dreams as dreams are totally random and her dreams could be revealing her inner thoughts and desires (*cough* James *cough) in a weird and bazaar way. It's totally awesome as it is, but just an idea for the future chapters :) I can't believe that I've only got 4 chapters left and then I will have ran out for now... I started reading them yesterday! :D
As I have said in a previous review, I love that the characters are so realistic. I can really picture them in my mind. They each have their own positive traits and flaws. Each of the Marauders are portrayed perfectly and I love Lily's insane nature. Another person I can clearly picture is Miranda... shes so not perfect, which makes a character more realistic, as everybody has flaws... No perfect "Mary Sue" characters :)
How about bringing Severus into the story? ;) Sev is needed soon! Perhaps he could insult Lily and James could defend her... but instead of getting irritated with James, it makes her like him even more :)
Also... perhaps James and Lily could sneak off to the R.O.R at some point...
Rating 10/10 definitely! :D

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