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Review:CambAngst says:
Hello, again! It's been a while. Glad to get back to your story.

Pierre's revelation to Katherine is heart-breaking. The last thing anyone ever wants to hear. I thought you set the scene up nicely and it was well-written. At the same time, Pierre's reaction felt a bit cold to me. Maybe it's just his "healer's detachment", but I would have expected him to be more comforting. Maybe try to tell her that her mother really did love her. Just something to soften the blow.

Her life really is collapsing around her, isn't it? Aside from the normal stresses of Fifth Year, there's also her disastrous personal life. I like that she realizes that it's truly just a consequence of her own choices, and the sense of powerlessness you gave her is frustrating but very realistic for a character her age. I'm looking forward to seeing how she gets past it.

It was neat to see her spend a bit of time with Hermione in the library. If the two of them become friendly, it might help Katherine find some clarity. Hermione is very insightful!

I thought your writing was fantastic in this chapter. I'm reading and reviewing on my phone, so I can't be quite as nit-picky as usual, but I really didn't see any typos, spelling or grammar problems. This is such a good story. I can't believe it isn't getting more love!

Author's Response: Hey! Sorry I haven't responded to your review but I've been so busy lately in fact I've barely been on the forums either...I hate school :( But here I am!

Your reviews are always a pleasure to read whether they have loads of CC or not I always learn or pick up a little something from them.

Pierre will soften the blow or rather he'll be after this he'll become someone more important in Katherine's life.

Her life is just falling to pieces I just wasn't sure I portrayed that correctly but thank you for think I gave her a realistic sense of powerlessness. I can't wait until she gets past it. I actually see some comment from Hermione give her some clarity.

I would love for them to become friendly especially since I feel Hermione didn't socialize much with people outside her year, it'd be cool to see her make an older friend.

I know what it feels like to review on something other than your computer, it does get frustrating, though I wished you would've seen th edited version... (I just submitted into the queue :P)

Lol thank that last sentence coming from you means alot :)


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