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Review:bester_jester says:
A great start. It would be great to hear how Violet feels about going to school, and what she thinks of her family.

You've done a great characterisation of Lucius - still a grumpy mean guy! Love it.

I found that the ending was a bit blunt, and in your story summary you've spelt 'generation' wrong. Also, 'good' in the title probably wouldn't be the right word.. 'well' fits in better.

Anyway! Sorry I'm really picky, but I feel like this has heaps of potential! Off to read the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you like him, some death eaters never learn ;) Any advice is appreciated, especially spelling, I'm really big on getting it right. Hmm well I don't know, this might still sound really illiterate, but I meant good as in "good and evil" as opposed to something going well, if that makes any sense, but I get what you mean :S Anyway, I've written like a whole novel in response, but thanks for being the first reviewer!

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