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Review:bester_jester says:
Haha here's my real review - accidently sent in that last smiley face by itself!

(btw, the smile was meant to be my face right now).

First story I've read by you (and I checked your page, you have heaps!) and it was amaaazing. Fantastic characterisation, prose and feelings.

I loved the first bit about Parvati the best. The way you described hers and Lavender's conversations, and how they were going to live together... so sad.

I found Hermione's bit a bit (eek so many 'bits') confusing in how it was written. It was great, but yeah. Sort of hard to follow in places. I did love how Ron found her though, and 'his voice saying my name' rah rah rah was so lovely.

Okay, i'ma stop now. Lovely, really really lovely writing. Now off to read the rest of your stories!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That's so sweet of you to say. Hermione's bit is a lot more choppy, which is actually how I usually write. the two others are more similar. I loved writing Parvati's too! It was actually the one that started it all. Thank you so much for reviewing, it really means a lot.

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