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Review:Loopy456 says:
Hello! Yes, I am back. And wow, poor Astoria. Her father really doesn't care about her much, does he? I think that having Draco look up the Greengrass family like that was a clever way of laying their family history out nice and simply. But it does make me wonder more about where Astoria came from, if you know what I mean.
I enjoyed the bit with Draco. I can see how angry it would make him if Blaise was to get invovled with Astoria, now that Draco has marked her as 'his'. Boys and their territories...
I wonder what will happen at the Zabinis' house? Nice little cliffhanger there. I love writing cliffhangers but I hate reading them, so I am getting a little taste of my own medicine here! I'll be back!

Alex :D

Author's Response: Hello!

Welcome back! Poor Astoria indeed! Her father doesn't care much for her and it was pretty darn obvious with this chapter and I was like, "Man, this family is terrible." And they are. :D
Phew! I wasn't sure if you or anyone else would like this chapter very much, it wasn't my favorite to write at all. Originally, I went in a completely different direction that would have gotten this story NOWHERE. So this chapter was such a stretch and I thought, "No one is going to get this..." but yay, you liked it! :p
Astoria is a mystery, wrapped in an enigma and cloaked in lies. Hahaha. You find out more and more about her towards the later half of the story (Which isn't typed...sadly.)
Oh, Draco and his ego! Its so massive that I barely got to fit it all in on my laptop! There's something rather childish and sinister about that boy and its fun to write.
Ooh, you shall have to see then! There are three more chapters after this and you'll get your fill of Blaise! I love leaving cliffhangers, I think they're fun! :D But not fun to read when you're really liking a story...sigh. How I have fallen prey to them on many nights...:D
Thanks for reviewing again!
Much love,

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