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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
So, I saw the link to this in your status and thought, "huh, I'll have to read that some time tomorrow." But then I hear how cute it was and couldn't resist giving it a quick read before I signed off for the night.

Omg. This was so cute. Everything about this moment was so perfect and sweet and (to steal the title of the one-shot) fleeting. Neville Longbottom always has a way of stealing my heart, and I adore reading things when he and Hannah are well written -- and oh my were they well written here.

I almost can't believe how short this was, you managed to capture quite a lot in these few words... and that is quite the accomplishment! I loved the description and pretty much everything. The bit about Neville asking Hannah to the Ball just after Ernie had was brilliant.

Gah. So much cuteness, you'll have to excuse all the rambing in this review.So well written... it makes me wish you wrote more of them.

xoxo
Melissa

Author's Response: Oh, my, who did you hear from? Haha. I'm glad you came by, though, and I apologize that this response has taken so long.

Neville is quite the little prince, isn't he? I had never tried them before, and had been tempted by it for quite a while, so I just did. I'm so glad that the characterization, imagery and plot worked for you, even considering the brevity of the piece. I might just have to return to fluffy Hannah/Neville later on :)

Thanks again for this sweet review!

-Amanda


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