1st to favorite, 1st to review, yay me, haha!! =P
SOFXHOMRYMUH!?!?! OMGosh, wow!! This was SOO good!! Depressing, yeah, but good at the same time. It seriously almost made me cry, Jayde. The emotion in it was spot-on hun, VERY well done! Everything flowed so nicely, and the attention to detail was great. And your descriptions are ah-mazing!!! ^_~
I'll be honest, I've NEVER read a Charlie-central fic before. But your portrayal of him is quite good, him & Bill both. I could totally see the 2 of them being closer with one another than they are the others. I heart their brotherly-love in this already, lol. So I especially liked the bit between the 2 of them... The poor Weasley's, I feel so bad for them. :(
This story is off to a great, great start so far and I for one am anxious to see what happens next! You have definitely left me wanting more. I got to the end and I was like... Wait, that's it?? So now you have to update this SOON ok? Oh, and I didn't really see any grammatical or spelling errors, so you and your Beta are super-awesome, haha!! Your writing is so Fab Jayde, I just love it!!! =)
Author's Response: D.E.A.N.A. ! Thank you SO, SO much for being the first to read and review AND favorite this! I can't tell you how much it means to me, and I'm sooo thrilled that you enjoyed it!
Honestly, I've never really read a Charlie-central fic before either, and I have NO idea where the idea for this came from. It just sort of... showed up out of nowhere. Haha; I love their brotherly love already, too! :) And I know, poor Weasleys! :( But things will get better for them, I promise!
I promise I will update soon. In fact, I'm going to go try to write chapter two right now! Again, thank you SO much for all your kind words and for reading/reviewing/favoriting! *hugs*