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Review:caoty says:
Hi, I'm here from tag.

Your characterisation of Sirius is spot on, and I like all the little things that totally could have happened: a relative (I assume) of Seamus' being this story's version of Stan Shunpike, and the constant repetition of the word 'pureblood'. I don't know if that last one was intentional or not, but it definitely made me see why Grimmauld Place could be so overwhelming.

I've a couple of critiques, nothing too big:
a) Orion and Walburga speak fairly informally for someone of their social status, and it's a bit odd.
b) The giant spaces in between paragraphs are a little jarring.

Apart from that, though, well done. I do have a soft spot for Regulus. :)

Author's Response: Hi there!

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I am glad that you like the way I portray Sirius and all the details. Yep, a distant relative and it was intentional. I wanted you to be able to see how Sirius felt. I'm glad that it worked. =)

I plan on fixing those spaces. This was written before I knew how to work with the spacing. I think the reason why I made them so informal is because they were angry and had too many emotions to know how to speak formally when they were mad.

Yay!! A fellow Regulus fan!! He is my favorite! =)

Thanks again!
-SR17


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