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Review:Troubled says:
NUH. To be honest, I literally screamed when I saw chapter Sixteen was up :L

They were all so pathetic, no more powerful than the first years that entered Hogwarts.

^ That line killed me, in a good way. It's not surprising he would even think that. I mean, come on; it isn't like he wouldn't be thinking that. He's Tom freaking Riddle Jr. He'll use someone, until there isn't anything left!

"I've grown quite fond of her," Alphard whispered.

AW. SO. CUTE. ;-; in a weird way, though. I have a feeling now that at first Alphard might have only went with her, because Tom might have said something about getting close to Jade's best friend, using information, manipulative shit, etc.

Now the little confession, aw; Riddle doesn't have a true romantic bone in his body D:
obviously, he doesn't. He's Voldy for Merlin's sake.

"What do you want right now, Jade?"

"I want you to kiss me."

Success. He picked her chin up in his palms and pulled her face into his. I want that, too, he whispered, their lips brushing together. Lavender and vanilla filled his senses. You always smell so nice. He pressed into her. She was, surprisingly, a wonderful kisser. Her full lips were soft, and her mouth was sweet.

He could conquer anything, including the worthless little bitch in his arms. "I really like you, Jade," he murmured in-between kisses. Yes. This idiot girl was going to be perfectly useful in the future. So smart, yet stupid enough to trust him.


but then you killed me. You crushed my hopes as fast as you placed them inside my heart.

Good job. :3

Author's Response: Rawr, Tom is very much into himself, isn't he? Such a meanie!

hahaha aww, Alphard & Dahlia. I'm not completely sure those two will ever fall apart. They seem like a nice little couple, don't they? :) Of course Tom initiated their romantic involvement so he could get closer to Jade, but Alphard went above and beyond expectations and is actually harbouring feelings for Miss. Dahlia. How sweet.

Aww, I'm so sorry to disappoint about Tom not being too romantic. He was created that way. I think he would like to be, but he just can't.

hahahahaha Awww, I'm a dream crusher. I'm like the little kid with the magnifying glass and the ant hill with this story. :)

x Alicia

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