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Review:angel_speaks says:
The story overall was good. However, there were certain instances when i had to re-read several parts in order to figure out who was speaking. Also, it would make your story a lot better if you balanced the focus of your story between the dialogue, their actions and their thoughts. The history part kinda confused me; was this story focused on the founders' children? Because the story addressed the founders' as professors while the main focus of this prologue was on Helena Ravenclaw and Baron.

I really liked how you incorporated Merlin's assistants from the movie, the sorcerer's apprentice. it was interesting how you mixed it in with the history of the infamous families of the series. Good job! 8/10 ^_^

Author's Response: Hey thanks :) Oh sorry about that. I guess I got too, emm excited :D Not exactly founders' children. Helena is Baron is not :) Sorry about the confusion :(

Oh hehe I love legends. I just sort of mixed it up :D And added/cut off some parts and you know, made this whole thing up. Hehe

Thanks again :)


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