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Review:inkbutterfly says:
I really, really, really love this story.
Before I begin my massive gushy review, I wanted to point out that Lenny said she didnt even hear the answer when it should have said question. Just a little thing I picked up.
Okay, here we go. Teddy and Lenny fighting- as strange as this is, I actually was glad. Both of them have admitted they are drifting apart and changing and I guess I am just satisfied that now Teddy knows what she felt like. I want them to make it up, but as long as all this is sorted out.
Sirius is so nice! The cheering her up and roses and everything! I feel like Lenny doesnt just have a crush on him now, she genuinely likes him as a person. They got this whole inside joke vibe going on and and I like it ;)
James confuses me. What did Lenny do to him? Somehow he just seems mean now not funny.
I cannot wait until the masquerade ball! I hope it goes well, but I have this suspicion that it will end with Lenny curled in a ball and crying.
And I just wanted to say that if I have a pair of yellow knickers with pink and purple unicorns on them AND they were comfy, I would be extremely pleased.
Loved the chapter :)

-Kerryn xx

Author's Response: Oh goodness. I really should get a beta for this story. I am on it as soon as possible. Thank you so much for the love. It's really really appreciated. It's surprising how many people were happy they fought. Teddy needs the wake up call. He needs to appreciate Lenny more :). Lenny is completely into Sirius. In every way. As for James... well, he's just being James. He thinks he's funny, but is just blowing it all out of proportion. He's excited he got a date with Lily and is all "high and mighty". He'll grow out of it, trust me.
And I would LOVE underwear like that. Just saying.

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