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Review:Aderyn says:
Hello!

Wow, I just happened upon this story, and I am completely intrigued! This prologue really makes me want to hear more of Diana's story.

In just a few paragraphs, you managed to create a voice for your narrator, one that seems to speak to the reader with words that are rather chilling. There is a weight behind the words, of inevitability or a loss of innocence (I don't quite have a word for it) that is absolutely compelling.

I honestly cannot wait to read more! Wonderful job!!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! :) I'm really glad you like it - I'm always a bit nervous with prologues. I don't like to make them too long, but it's always difficult to communicate everything you would like to in a short amount of time.

Thank you again. I'll have the next chapter up asap. :)


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