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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hey! :)
Aw this is actually terrific! I wasn't sure what to expect, though I always love a good next-gen, so this definitely makes me happy! From the start I was just instantly hooked in. JAME'S CHARACTERISATION. I LOVE IT. Not only do you diverge from the typical popular handsome guy with an awesome job, but I love how he is so different! I love his bad attitude because I hardly ever see it.

And the writing itself is just brilliant! I really need to read more of your stories! I loved how you've already developed the plot well - upcoming Lily's wedding and meeting this intriguing Ruby (again after 10 years).. makes me curious to know what happened before!

So, fantastic writing, and a really awesome chapter! I'm going on to chapter 2 now :) I'm glad you posted in that TDA Story thread - this is most certainly more deserving of reviews ♥

Author's Response: Hello!

Oh wow, thank you so much! I'm so glad you like this version of James. I don't know what made me write him as such a big grump, but it's really stuck throughout the story now and I wonder if I can find a suitable excuse for his actions XD

Ooh please do! And to be honest this story has the least plot-planning. I'm just doing it as it comes to me, and have nothing planned in my head for these two. I'm trying to sit down and map out how I'd like this story to move, but it's easier said than done, especially when my other story is hogging all of my muse lol

Thank you, and I'm so glad you stumbled upon it! Thank you :3

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