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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
Hmmm I thought this piece was interesting.

The first bit especially I thought was fabulous with the description of Tonks and her almost infatuation with Redmus before they first got together. The talking it over with Molly, her realising everything he had suffered. I also liked the part where Molly seems to be reassuring Tonks that everything would turn out okay!

The following paragraph about their marriage is just so awesomely cute!

The second part confused me a little so I had to reread several times but in the end I decided it was meant to be confusing? If not I would recommend breaking up the paragraph!

Also I found the bit quite sweet about Tonks changing into Sirius (well sort of) for Remus. It shows that even though she wants him to love her, she wants to make him happy!

Author's Response: 'Interesting' is a bit of an understatement. 'Disturbing' is what most people go for. :P

Infatuation is the impression I wanted to give, so I'm glad that got through.

You might just be the one person who thinks that the marriage part is cute. The general opinion is that it is unbelievably depressing, which it is, to some extent. Tonks is adorable though, and she'll always be adorable, not matter what Remus does.

The confusion was indeed intentional, but there's a rhythm to it which would've been lost if I'd broken up the sentence.

It is sweet in a twisted sort of way, I suppose. I don't know, I've personally never looked at it that way before. I suppose it's just a matter of opinion. It is a way of Tonks expressing her love for Remus, though, I guess.

Thank you for your review. You've given me plenty of food for thought. :)


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