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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
Oh this is completely fabulous!

The writing is so powerful. Although you do not mention the name of the person in the first piece this made it even more powerful and seemed to hit home the results of his actions. There is all an overwhelming amount of angst in here which makes it even more enticing to read!

I loved the bit about Lupin afterwards. It makes him seem to be powerful in his own way because he keeps the letter and even starts to write his own. In the short paragraph you also appear to make him seem humbling too when he's taking about his wife and son.

The last line is just wow! Well done

Author's Response: Heh, I love angst, it's all I can write. I'm glad it worked for you, it was in danger of sounding like some story about some guy who sits around writing letters and feeling sorry for himself. Which it is, really, but you know.

Remus is a strange one to write in relation to his family, because he seems to be utterly ambivalent towards them. I wanted to be able to capture that in a sentence, and I guess I didn't do too badly.

Thank you so much for your review. :)


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