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Review:PotterUnited says:
Hello! I accidently posted a review for this chapter on the last chapter! However, I shall add to my review here :)

This story is absolutely amazing! I love the mischief Lily, the Marauders and her friends get into. I also love that throughout all the fun and excitement, hints of Voldemort and the Death Eaters are still included.

Finally, I love that the characters are all absolutely bonkers! I do love crazy characters.

The way you have written Lily and the Marauders is really effective- you have shown both the strengths and the weaknesses of the characters. Could you perhaps do that with the other characters? :) I love the madness, however I'd also love to find out more about their other sides. Like how both Jess and Molly are amazing at pyrotechnics (that is the strength), however the downside is that they set people on fire- perhaps they are rather thoughtless?- which is one of their weaknesses. It could create some awesome conflicts to use in the story :)

Definitely giving this a 10/10 rating! Keep on writing :D I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: aww thanks so much i just couldn't stop grinning when i read this! I've gone into detail with most of the characters but i realized today that i haven't really developed characters like Abi and Nicola... So they are going to have their own chapters i think so you guys can learn a bit more about them. I think Jess and Molly can be rather thoughtless sometimes like they're so caught up in their own crazy worlds they occasionally don't think about others or consequences. I will keep on writing and the next chapter should be uploaded soon, but i've had them all sort of pre-written up to here so it might take a bit longer than usual.

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