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Review:hugsxkisses says:
Meh. Great story idea, but the spelling and grammar is absolutely terrible. Maybe you should get someone to revise this story at the forums, itll help your story alot. I've read a similar story to this and it was great because of the way it was written. The idea alone will not attract readers. It must be written correctly. I know some people struggle with writing, but you should use spell check, it really helps. (If you use a word processor like Microsoft Word)

1)Why is Ginny so weak? In the HP books she is portrayed as a strong and independent character. She doesn't seem right.

2)This story goes too slow. 9 chapters and we haven't even reached Halloween yet.

Would've been a great story but it needs work...

Author's Response: Thanks for a truthful review. I have loads of problems with Grammar, and at the end of the story i'm going to go back over and re-write it. I do use Word to write it, but sometimes it doesn't help with Grammar. Ginny is weak because I wanted her to seem strong to everyone but in the inside is breaking apart, I've always thought as Ginny like that. Don't worry she will get stronger as the story proceeds. The chapters are going quicker now after the Halloween I promise its just a slow beginning. Thanks so much for being nice about it (I've had some people who are really mean about it) and being honest, I admire honest people

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