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Review:Reader4297 says:
I really enjoy the stories, but I have one question. Is there an overarching antagonist that connects each of the major plots? For example, in the original books, that would be Tom Riddle.

If there is, I might suggest a little more foreshadowing and linkage between the plots. If there isn't, and this is just a series of "short stories" that continue the story of the characters, perhaps organizing into chapters or even different stories?

Overall, I really enjoy the story you are writing. The characters have reasonably depth, the writing is good, and the storyline has decent complexity.

Thanks!

Author's Response: Dear 4297,

Thanks for the review and welcome to my story. I'm glad that you're enjoying what I'm writing. If you look, you'll see that chapters 1-6 were used to finish up JK's story. Chapters 6-31 was the vampire plague. Chapters 31-38 was the Incubus attack, and chapters 38 on is the battle with Kali. I tried to introduce the next part of the story before I finished up the story's chapter that I was working on. The main thread was the continueing life of Harry and Ginny. I'll try to put a bit more into the cross overs from this point on. Stay with me there's a lot more to come.

Until next time,

Marc


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