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Review:luciusobsessed says:
I love your story! Oh poor Sirius. His family is so neglectful towards him. No wonder he holds James to such high esteem as he's the only family he's got. Regulus doesn't seem too bad. I sort of like him. Their parents, however, are horrible!

I love the way you shape your words. Your descriptions are perfect. Not too much, not too little...they're just right! I also love how you portray Sirius as indifferent towards his family.

So excited to read your next few chapters! :)

Author's Response: Hi, and thanks for coming by!

Everyone who has read this chapter, I think, has commented on how much they pity Sirius. I agree; I tried to make his family life seem as horrid as possible without going over the top. At the same time, though, I didn't want to demonize Regulus too much, since the impression we get of him in canon is of a boy who basically just got in over his head. So I think it's okay for you to like Regulus :)

It's great that the word choice and description worked here for you, as well as the characterization. Thanks for your kind review!

-Amanda


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