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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Oh, you silly goose. This chapter is just as good as the other ones, if not even better. :)
Davies is starting to turn on his charm, isn't he? It's a complete 360 from the way he treated her at the beginning. I can't wait til he gets his comeuppance!!
"Voldemart"?! Bahahahaha!! Did you make that up? I would love to see one of those in real life. :)
How many chapters is the story going to be?! I was hoping it would be quite long, so that the magic didn't have to end so soon! Maybe when you finish, you could write a sequel? *puppy dog eyes*
Anyways, much love for updating, and update again when you can!! ;)

Author's Response: *hugs* thank you so much! I'm alright with how this turned out, because I wrote one draft (all conversation, barely any descriptive paragraphs) and then started filling it in so that it wasn't just a heap of one-liners. As for Voldemart, I'm not entirely sure about this, but I was stalking the city of London on google maps and I think I saw a store or something called Voldemart? Or I came up with it somehow but either way. Let's say it exists XD And so would I!

As for the number of chapters -- I can't put a finger on it at the moment. I'm going to say there'll be at least another four or five, because I want to write more about the Davies-Audrey "friendship", their NEWTs (which I know seems like the least interesting thing to read about at the moment, given the circumstances) and want to discuss Hugo and Audrey's future plans a bit more as well. So I think you can expect another 5-ish chapters.

Oh ignore Davies. He'll get what he deserves ;) Thank you so much for this lovely review, dear!


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