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Review:Hogwartsishome says:
I've read all of the first three chapters and I must say this story is looking to be incredibly intriguing.

The plot I believe is absolutely brilliant in itself and although it carries a Hunger Games like feel it is very different and extremely unique. Not only is the basic plot fantastic so far but the minor details that are included seem to have been thoroughly thought out, making for a very well flowing impressive read!

I also think the characterisation of the characters written about so far is superb! Dobby especially stood out for me along with Regulas, Tonks and of course Lily.

So far the whole concept is thrilling and I desperately look forward to reading more. Your writing style is very good and keeps my interest fantastically, the vocabulary is spectacular and I can really picture everything that is described, which is brilliant!

Only problem I have is that the paragraphs are slightly long and I find myself losing track sometimes, but that's merely a personal gripe of mine so I wouldn't take too much notice!

I will definitely continue to read your story, it's like a whole new breath of fresh air! I'm not surprised it is so popular! I do hope the story continues to interest me because if it does this is looking to be a real winner!

Author's Response: Hello there! Thanks for stopping by my story. :) I'm glad you've enjoyed the first three chapters!

Haa yes, I've been told before that there is a Hunger Games vibe. I suppose it's pretty inevitable, since the Huger Games is so popular right now, that reading about a tournament and death will sort of bring that to mind. It's styled more after the Triwizard Tournament, but I don't mind the comparison.

I'm pleased that you like the characterization; I had a lot of fun with this chapter because I could write about minor characters like Bathilda, Dilys, and Regulus and have them all interacting in the same scene.

Yeah, some of the paragraphs are a bit long, but I do that to sort of balance out the shorter paragraphs composed of dialogue.

I hope you continue to like this story, and thank you for your review. :)

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