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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

I am sorry that it has taken me so long to review this chapter for you. I have been very busy this week, but I am here now.

I really liked this chapter. I enjoyed seeing them return to Hogwarts and I liked that Slytherin has gained more new students. The girls should be fairly interesting and what possible chaos they will bring among the second year boys seems like it is going to brew up. I am so happy that Morgan was sorted into Slytherin. He will also be a great contribution.

I really love the sorting hat song. I cannot imagine writing one myself and you make it seem so easy. It was flawless and I really like how creative you are with them.

This chapter has been awesome. I love the characters and seeing, or reading rather, how a year makes a difference. I am quite curious as to what is going to happen when they start their classes and I am interested in the new Defence teacher.

Keep up the awesome writing! =)

-SR17

Author's Response: Thank you :)

I am still not sure that my efforts quite class as songs; they're more like poems in iambic verse, but I suppose they get the job done.

My concern with this year is that a lot of this writing is just description without too much of a purpose that doesn't really hold attention - how close am I to boring you?!

Sheriff


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