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Review:charlottetrips says:
I told you I would be stalking your authorís page :P plus I always love a Remus story. And itís in Second Person! *swoons*

For the first time in your life, your problem does something good; it makes the four of you inseparable. - I got a little choked up on this line because thinking of it from Remusí perspective, after having lived a life of shame and fear of hurting others, the fact that he found friends who he could just be himself around, thatís just priceless.

Gah, I went into this story knowing I was going to tear up. Iím made to cry so easily sometimes, especially on stories about Remus. His life was so hard after the bite and he took everything on as such a heavy burden.

The concept is brilliant, absolutely brill. Iím sure that youíve been told this before in your other reviews, but I just have to say it again. I actually pulled up a chart of the phases of the moon so I could fully appreciate this story without conking out because I didnít understand what waxing gibbous meant. The story starts out with such hope and then sadness and then a bit of hope again until the final moment when itís sad and bitter.

Author's Response: Stalking is fully welcome (: I was a little nervous about writing Remus so I'm so so so so glad that you enjoyed this. Yeah, Remus' life is basically one giant pity party here. Maybe I should put a BYOT (Bring Your Own Tissue) warning in the summary hehehe.
Actually, no one has actually mentioned pulling up a chart of the phases of the moon to follow along, but I'm so happy you did. I wish I could've found a way to make the phases more integrated into the story, but oh well. Thank you so much for your lovely reviews! :D You are brill.


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