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Review:sour_grapes_snape says:
Yay for update! Believe me, I understand the computer issues, so all is forgiven!

I think you did perfectly fine with Harry. His part was so brief that it's difficult to get a grasp on his personality. Therefore, you didn't make him too different from the books. And even if you did, it's only natural that he would change a bit with age. So don't worry too much in the future :)

I'm really curious about Taylor's dad. Right now, I have no idea what to expect.

I really liked all the I interaction between her and James. I especially like how they didn't instantly like or dislike each other or have a big issue from the past. That's different from a lot of stories.

Great chapter and I am super excited for the next one!

-Laura

Author's Response: haha thanks :) I'm pretty sure my computer is bipolar but whatever.

I purposefully kept Harry's part brief because writing him freaks me out. JKR already develped him so much that I feel like it's nearly impossible to keep him completely in character. I'm still trying to figure out what I imagine the future Harry to be like since he will definitely have changed but I'm still not really sure how I'm going to do it. There will be more scenes with him in the future though.

All of Taylor's secrets shall be revealed ;)

I think Taylor and James lived in two completely different worlds at Hogwarts. James was the son of Harry Potter and loved the school while Taylor wasn't very well known during her first few years and wanted to be anywhere but Hogwarts. I will admit, however, that they do have a bit of a backstory.

I'm glad you liked the chapter and thank you so much for the review!


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