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Review:charlottetrips says:
Ooh, this was different. GOOD different. I'm not a poetry type of person and so was a bit confuzzled with the first two lines but once I got into the rhythm of the story, I really got into the rhythm! I appreciate this style.

There are times when I read a story and honestly kind of skim over it, not skim-skim but read it quickly, meaning not really reading each word. (God, I hope that doesn't make me sound like an awful reader because I'm not really.) Your story had me savoring the words. I wanted to read each line to really get what you were trying to say. It's not that the way you wrote it was confusing, it's that the story was just so worth reading.

The moment when Caradoc actually spoke to Rosemerta was so filled with heightened emotion that I was sitting over here feeling a bit giggly at the whole exchange. And the whole, "Anyone would be lucky to talk to you" bit had my heart melting.

I liked how you couched the judgments that the other patrons of the bar would lay on the line about Rosemerta and about Caradoc and how she knew but didn't really care. A barmaid, to me, would be pretty observant, like she wouldn't be able to help but be that way at all.

Anyway, I think I've blabbered on enough about this awesome story. Thank you so much for deciding to branch out and try this style. It was great to read!

Author's Response: ooh! Hey!

Good different is an excellet compliment, so thank you!! I hope this doesn't sound egotistical, but when I wrote this I literally deliberated over word choice so much. I'm glad that you savored the words!! I really wanted to mimic a sort of poetical feel in this.

Thank you so, so much!!

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