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Review:charlottetrips says:
Yay! A Molly II story! Those are few and far between for me and I like that it's also a Molly that is relatable and not totally prissy and female version of early Percy :P

You've done a wonderful job of setting up your story of change (because that's where I assume this is going). Molly's attitude through this whole thing is just long-suffering and miserable and it's something I can practically feel to my toes. :( I think we've all been there with the teenage angst and you've gotten it down. You've also given us a bit more reason with Molly of why she would feel that way.

Audrey's over-fussing on her eldest showed where Molly was coming from. The slights from her own family (minus Louis and George) greatly illustrated how Molly was an "afterthought" (an apt description I thought). When Roxanne asked Molly to get the beverages I was silently fuming.

I can't believe how Molly just took it when those bullies poured that stuff on her! And how no one from the clan even seemed to notice?!? That seems off to me but I guess there will be more explanation as I read on.

Like I said, a very good set up chapter!

xChar

Author's Response: WOW! Thank you so much for this, I really appreciate it. You are so sweet! Thank you for bringing the whole weasley clan point to my attention... I never really thought about that, so thank you!
Thanks again for your AWESOME review, hope to catch you around the forums again soon! :)


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