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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
Fleur is such a nosy-body. It's really a mystery how she and Molly didn't get along at first, well it's not really a mystery, but Molly is a nosy-body too.

"You know. She was giving you the Piercing Stare."

^ I liked this line because it just reminds me of my mother and the looks she always gives me and my sister. We always make fun of her and give them a name and then do them to tick her off. Too funny so I liked that because it showed an element of 'family' if you know what I mean, how close the Weasley's are.

I thought the reason that he decided to get married made sense because of the past chapters. I just kind of wish his brother would have been a bit more questioning about it because it's out of the blue for his character to want to marry.

There were two sentences that needed to be edited but I'm in a bit of a rush so I can't point them out. Sorry! :D I can't wait for Fleur to start to like 'Mr. Weasley,' I'm in a really fluffy mood for some reason.

Author's Response: Just so you know, this story is not very strong on spelling and grammar :P I just get attacked by the urge to write this and once I'm done writing the chapter, I'm done. I don't want to revisit it. It's a bit strange, honestly.

I'm glad the family feel is coming through. I'm planning on further stories with the Weasleys in this universe so hopefully MY Weasleys grow on you.

I guess you could say the reason Charlie didn't question him so much is because this story is straddling a Victiorain-style story while also being set in modern Harry Potter era to a degree.

I'm glad you're liking where this is going. :)


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