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Review:caoty says:
Hi, I'm here from tag.

I'm going to mostly comment on your OC, because I'm pedantic about characterisation. I have a couple of questions for you:
-NEWTs in the wizarding world are roughly equivalent to A levels in the UK, right, and you can only do 5 at the most in two years, not because of intelligence (people who can do 5 are freakishly intelligent anyway) but because of the workload. Your OC will not have had the time to do 10 NEWTs, unless she spent four years studying them. So, how long did she spend studying them?
-Does she have flaws? She comes across as near-perfect.

Apart from those, I can see nothing really wrong with this chapter. In fact, I'm sort of wondering how she and Remus will interact. Should be fun. Well done with this one. ^.^

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

I confess that I know nothing about UK A levels. :) I seem to have gotten NEWTs confused with OWLs: when I was deciding what NEWTs she would have taken, I looked up other characters and saw that Bill & Percy each earned 12 OWLs and Hermione was on track to earn 12 before dropping Muggle Studies and Divination. Five NEWTs seems to be the minimum for healers and aurors, so I will have to go in an edit at some point ... thanks for the tip!

As for flaws ... yes, she's definitely on her best behavior in this chapter because she's at a job interview. Hopefully they emerge gradually over the course of the story, at least that has been my goal as I write. I will say that she lies to Dumbledore in this chapter. ;)

Thanks again for the review!

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