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Review:TenthWeasley says:
Callie, this was adorable! You know I'm always up for a good fluffy romantic story, and boy, you delivered! I've got all these warm, fuzzy feelings floating about inside me now. :D

Given that we never really see Molly and Arthur at this age in canon, I think you've got them characterized very well. Throwing in that bit about Arthur and Muggles at the end, too, was an especially nice touch! I can very much see this being how their elopement would have gone, too: The slightly dilapidated robes, the shy looks, the hurried feel, the simplistic beauty of the rings. It's a very realistic way of describing things.

I love thinking about the people these two will become: The parents of one of my all-time favorite literary families. ♥ I adore the Weasleys and am so, so excited to see what you've got in store for the other nine chapters on down the road! I do hope we'll see lots of adorable little children -- baby Weasleys are the best. :D

Great job, Callie -- I really enjoyed this. And I'm already looking forward to the second chapter! :3

Author's Response: Okay so I SUCK at responding to my reviews *hides face in shame*

So glad you think I got the characterisation right!! I really wanted to convey Molly and Arthur as a pair of young people who are just really in love with each other. I loved writing Arthur's bits the most because I just have this adorable image of how in love with Molly he was and always has been in my mind.

There will be plenty of baby Weasleys to come. I'm writing the second chapter now which is about baby Bill :)

Thank you for reviewing and I shall let you know when I have the second chapter up :)


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